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Wild_Child

1867

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

Starterholics The Writer's Guild The Pet Association PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov

Chapter 13~Meeting 1 & 2

The next morning Moon lead us to a near-by Kingdom.It was beautiful.He lead us straight through the down,which took most of the day,then to the castle.By the time we got there...let's just say it wasn't morning anymore.
We walked to the gate.Then a Guard came down.Moon smiled,"Hello Torn!"The Guard looked at Moon,then burst out laughing and hugged him.
"Ah,Moon!Where've you been?"He stepped back,still smiling.
"Oh,I've been living away for far too long,waiting for this mare to be born and to bring her here where she belongs."He gestured to me."Then I'm guessing the Queen was the one who sent you?"Moon Nodded.Then Torn stepped aside."Then she's probably waiting."Moon glanced back at us,then lead us in.
We walked to the frnt door of the castle,only to be greeted by a mare the same breed as Torn,and another the same breed as me.I stared at them.
"Ah!Moon."The Mountie smiled.Moon stepped in when she stood aside.He hugged her,then the other mare.The mares looked at me.Then Dream.
"Oh,Your Majestys,this is Free,and her friend Dream."I smiled at them,Dream's was more shy.
"Hello."The Pegasus smiled."I'm Young.This is my mother Humor."I smiled.Her voice flowed like music."You'll be staying here with us."
"Okay."I smiled.Then I thought of the previous night,Young looked just like the First pony.That must mean they know who the Second was as well.
She lead me and Dream through hall after Hall.Then up some stairs to a third floor."You'll be staying up here on the third floor with me and my friend Wild.Just pick one of these two bedrooms,"she pointed at two rooms,"Or if you want seperate,that's fine.Just make yourselves at home."She smiled then trotted off.But half way down the hall she stopped."If you need anything,just ask anyone,they'll tell you what you need.Or come find me or my mother.Supper is also at 5:00 P.M."She smiled then was gone.Me and Dream looked at eachother.
"I don't want to be alone...this seems alittle odd..."She looked at me.I nodded,but I was perfectly fine either way.We walked into the nearest room.Then looked around,it was HUGE!We looked at eachother and laughed.Then ran around the room,admiring it.
We then decided to have a look around outside,since it was such a glorious day.We headed down the nearest stair case to the first floor.Then out the nearest door.The sun shown on our faces.We saw a pond and walked towards it.The water sparkled and the reflectiong caught in our silvery mane.We saw a bench,but deciced to sit on the ground in the grass instead.Then we saw two ponies walking in that direction.One was a large whute mountie and one was a mare like me,again.
I watched them,they walked to a bench near us,not seeming to notice us.Dream hadn't even noticed them.Then the mountie saw me and I looked away,laying back on my back,next to Dream.
The mare had looked just like me and that mare Young.They both looked like the mares from the story Moon had told me.I thought about it.When I looked up again,the ponies were walking away. I feltmy stomach gruble,so I got up and woke dream who had dozed off."Come on,I imagine it's near Supper now."She smiled nd rubbed her tummy.I laughed then we followed the pair,since we assumed that they were also going to supper.We soon found they were.
When we entered the Dining Hall,I saw Moon,Humor nd Young.Then I saw the Mare and Stallion from outside.When Moon saw me and Dream he stood and greeted us.
"Ah!You decided to join."He smiled.I nodded and he showed me and Dream to our seats.Then we ate a lovely dinner of Cooked apples in caramel,oats and carrots,and Alfalfa cubes.
When we were finished we all sat at the table,everyone making conversationg,except me and Dream.Then Finally Humor spoke."Excuse me,but I have an annoucment."Every one quieted."Well,I would like to educate you youngsters on a prophecy.A prophecy over 100 years old!"Every one smiled."It's said that three mares,will come together,one of KORR,one of the Cyan Lady,and one of neither,and they will become good friends.The first will be of neither.The second of KORR.The third of the Cyan Lady."She smiled,looking at us three mares.We all looked at eachother.I could tell it was the one next to the stallion's first time hearing this."The Second will fall in love,and carry child.Then,when the child is born,the First and Third mare will pass.Their Spirits entering the Baby.That Baby will bring all of Ponyisland Peace,bringing KORR and The Cyan Lady to harmony."Everyone sat looking at eachother.
"So who are the mares?"The Mare asked.
Humor Looked at Young,who spoke,"I'm one."
"I'm three."I spoke.Then we all looked at the mare.Who Now blushed.
"So I-I'm Two?I have to fall in love!?And Carry Child!?"We chuckled.Then Humor nodded.
"But not until you're ready child."The mare then exhaled deeply,as if releived.
"For now you three will be spending much time together and becoming eqainted.We looked at eahcother,ll thinking the same.
What of the future?

The Guard:Torn and Tattered
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03-28 23:50

*~Butterfly~*

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United States - USR

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O.O theponies have untited *says in a mystical old man voice*
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04-02 00:31

Wild_Child

1901

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

The Writer's Guild The Pet Association PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov Starterholics

Here's a new POV for ya' :smile
It's a surprise.....

Chapter 14~

I walked through the dark.No One was out and about.The wind was chilling to my fur.I stopped when I saw a moving shadow nearing me.I jumped into a near by bush.They walked by whistling an unfamiliar tune.
Whent hey passed I walked out from behind the bush.I huffed,a flame coming out of my mouth-it happened when I was impatient."Why is he taking so long?"I grumbled under my breathe.Then I felt someone's presence.I turend around quickly.
He began laughing."Were you waiting long?"He teased,"I'm sorry if I took such a loong time I had to prepare myself."I rolled my eyes.I hated him,but I didn't have a choice,we were partners no matter what!KORR made us be together,no matter how much I protested."So tell me again Dargen,why are we looking for your sister?"I turned my back to him.
"Because,we have to kill her,besides,you know she's not my sister!"I hissed."If she were my sister,she would be yours two.Besides we aren't killing her tonight,we must wait for the others first!"
"Where are the girls anyways?"He plopped down."They're probably gonna' make us do all the dirty work anyways!They always do."He complained.Examining his claws as the slid smoothly out.He had been in this form for nearly 2 days now,only last night did he realise he couldn't change back.
"First of all,We don't know the other mare.Second of all,Alexus doesn't always make us do all the dirty work.She likes to kill others,you know that for a fact,seeing as how she tried to kill you once."He laughed.
"Yes,before I changed and nearly killed her instead."I rolled my eyes and began walking away."Where are you goin'?"
"For a walk.I'm tired of sitting here,I nearly sat here all day waiting for your lazy butt!"Then I walked away.I heard him start a fire,with just a simple breathe.
That was the cool thing about us four.We could all breathe fire,no matter what bred we were!

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Alexus and the other mare may be seen in my other PI FF(clickie on my other banner :P)
This Chapter will also be re-posted in the other story...since I can't think of anything else :XD I'm cheating...
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04-05 02:09

Wild_Child

1915

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

The Writer's Guild PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov Starterholics The Pet Association

bump,I'll add more soon :smile
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04-05 23:11

*~Butterfly~*

577

United States - USR

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04-09 01:17

Wild_Child

1931

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

The Pet Association Starterholics PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov The Writer's Guild

Chapter 14~3 Months Later...

April 1st:

Dear Father,
Well,I've been here for 3 months now.I have learned of the prophecy,and also that you have known all along!How could you not tell me?!


April 3rd:

Daddy,I'm prgenant.Me and Kiss are to be wed after the baby is born.And I suppose you know what willl happen next.Anyways,I'm,really hurt that you haven't replied to any of these letter.Don't you love me?

April 8th:

Today was interesting.
Our friend Moon,who helped us find the other mares has told me...something...Very...I have no word for it.He told me that you created 4 ponies,after I was born,to destroy me before the prophecy comes to life.How could you betray me like that?You took me in,you loved me like your own daughter.I loved you like my own father,even after you had your minions kill them.
And you know what,My baby is a Boy!And I hope the prophecy comes true,and he Kills you!And when it happens...I'll be standing right there,smiling.



"Wild,why must you keep sending letters to him?"Kiss stood behind me."You know he won't reply..."
"Because...I-I have to..."He shook his head at my reply.
"No,you don't."He leaned down and kissed my cheek."Moon told you that because you needed to know.Otherwise you would have stopped our son from killing KORR,like he's meant to."I nodded.
"It helps me let out my anger though..."I sighed.Then he walked to our bed,and layed on it.
Afew moments passed by,nothing but silence.Then he let out a deep sigh.It almost echoed.
"Come to bed.I don't want you to stress and make the baby come early.Plus tomorrow's Easter,you should be in a good mood!"I nodded,and climbed next to him.When I was settled in,he leaned over and swiftly kiss me.I giggled.
It didn't take long,then I was deep in sleep.
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04-15 00:40

*~Butterfly~*

599

United States - USR

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aww
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04-15 17:10

Wild_Child

1943

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

Starterholics The Pet Association The Writer's Guild PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov

Chapter 15~Last Day...

Now that Wild was Pregnant,me and Young only had afew days left.So we did whatever we could to make them the best. While Young spent her days with friends and wandering around,me and Dream spent them playing around.Dunking eachother in the pond,after we threw the other in. We had fun,and today,was our last.
I lifted Dream into my arms,and threw her as hard as I could into the pond.She went under then came back up giggling so hard she was red.I laughed,then jumped in.
For afew moments we sat there floating and looking at the sky. The hse looked at me,"Free?"
"Hm?"
"I'm not ready for you to go..."She looked back up at the sky.A tear rolled down her ckeek."I mean,my mom has only been gone for 7 months,I'm still not over that.I can't lose you too!"She wept.
"Don't cry.I'll still be here,just in a different way..."She looked at me again.
"Yes,but you'll also be a baby,and By the time the baby grows,It'll have to leave to defeat KORR."
I looked at her,I didn't know how to respond.I hadn't really planned what would happen to Dream after I left.
"Dream,today's my last day,okay.But only in this form.I'll still be here!"She shook her head."Okay,look,there's a witch in town right?"she nodded."Then we can go to her and have her change you to a baby,so that way,technically,you guys will grow up as best friends...again."She looked at me.
"A-Are you sure?"I nodded,she smiled."Okay..."
We got out of the water and made our way to the other side of town.
It took nearly 10 minutes,but we cheated and flew most of the may.When we got to the witches hut,she greeted us outside the door."Hello young ones."She smiled,and waved a worn hoof at us."What brings you here?"I looked at Dream.
"Well,I'm sure you know of the prophecy,"She nodded."Well,I'm Free,the htird of the mares.This is my friend Dream.We were wondering if ,maybe you could change her into a baby again?"
The witch tipped her head to the side."I'm Difference.And,may I ask why you want this done?"
"Um,we have decided that she would be the best choice for the babies companion..."She nodded.
"I see."Then she pointed inside,"Come in."

Difference:
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04-19 22:52

*~Butterfly~*

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United States - USR

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Oh! Yea! Witch Doctor!
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04-24 17:16

Berry

2696

United Kingdom - USR

What to write here...

Into the Woods WUA The Writer's Guild The Azuyan Project The Pet Association Starterholics Sweet as Can Be

chapter 14 is so sweet, in a sad way.
Keep it comming! Your stories are amazing! ;D
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04-27 23:56

Wild_Child

1961

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

Starterholics The Writer's Guild The Pet Association PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov

Sorry for the long wait guys!

Chapter 16:The final goodbyes

Free~

We sat in the hall of the hospital.In the background we could hear the vivid screams from Wild,Each time one excaped her lips,we winced in unison.
Me and Young were also becoming weaker by the minute,so we knew this was the end of us.We were just waiting now.I looked down in my lap,at Dream.She was,once again,a baby,sleeping so light and small in my arms.I was glad that she wouldn't remember anything from her life before now.And I asked everyone,that if ever he ask whom her mother is,they speek of me.And show her pictures.And to make sure she doesn't think I abandoned her,tell her of my story,but not hers.Tell her how much I always loved her.
I began to cry,tears falling on her,and wetting her fur.She opened her sweet little eyes,and I couldn't help but look into them.I saw all the times we spent together,and just held her tight.
"Ich werde dich immer lieben."I cried."Auf Wiedersehen."
(Meaning:"I will always love you" and "goodbye" in German)
She looked at me.I knew she didn't know what I was aying,nor did the other ponies.But I didn't care.

Young~

"Young...Free...It's time..."Humor huffed.She tired to hold back the tears.
I watched as Free handed her Dream,now a baby.The I stood,and gave Humor a kiss.
"I'll miss you."I whispered.I could feel tears burning my cheeks.I didn't even try to stop them.An neither did Free.
We walked side by side into the hospital room,and stood by Kiss who was Wild.
"Okay,"The doctor said."Just afew more pushes and you're done!"She moaned,then pushed.
I looked to Free,who was watching me.And Kiss watching both of us.
"Kiss,Take care of the baby."He nodded,tears also rolling down his cheeks.
Then I looked back to Free.She was starting to fade,and I guessed I was doing the same.She tried to smile,but instead began to weep louder.I did the same.We just couldn't stop.Then,it was dark....
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04-30 15:40

Wild_Child

1970

United States - USR

Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring -  Marilyn Monroe

The Pet Association Starterholics PonyIsland's Valkyrie Lov The Writer's Guild

Eh,I'm home from school today...not feeling well.So I'm going to post this chapter...post if you think you know who the POV is from! :happy
Chapter 17~

There's a sweet song my mother sings to me before she lays me down to rest at night. She sings it in her melody like voice. The words flowing sweetly out of here mouth.
I close my eyes to listen.It helps me concentrate on the words."Mommy,where did you hear this song,and Learn it?"I asked.
She Paused and looked at me.Then sighed."My friend tought me it."She smiled,looking out into the woods beyond our home,as if seing into the past.I looked at her,and saw she was starting to cry.
"Don't cry mommy."I leaned uo and kissed her on the cheek.She smiled.I smiled back.
"You know,tomorrow you turn 7 days told,and you'll be able to leave the nursery,and not just to go out side like today,I mean forever."She looked at me."And we''l have to think of a name won't we?"I nodded.And she chuckled."What Shall we name you?"
I thought,taking my time."I think Acies!"She cocked her head.
"Why that?"
I shrugged."I heard one if the mares in the nursery say it before...She said it meant Battlefeild."She stared at me.
"Okay...if that's the name you want.It's the name you shall have."She kissed me lightly on the cheek before leading me back to my stall in the nursery.

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06-09 18:04

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aww thats sweet
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06-23 00:03

Dreams Take Flight16

2024

United States - USR

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